Write in the concrete, not in the abstract. This is the overarching theme in my Creative Writing class with multiple Palanca winner Don Pagusara. Hence, the
recent exercises in metaphor (of which you should probably expect more.) We are not to write, for example, "sadness" but instead "one bird singing terribly afar in the lost lands" (after e.e. cummings).
This lesson brought back some old lessons in metaphysics. Aristotle wrote in
Categories about the different ways of being. The categories seem to be a suitable test for concreteness of concept. While I have not exhaustively tested for completeness, it might do for a rough guide.
Aristotle's Ten Categories are:
SUBSTANCE, what an object is, e.g., a human or a horse
QUANTITY, its measure, e.g., one, two, many, or few
QUALITY, the disposition of the subject, e.g., white, smooth
RELATION, as a comparison to another,e.g., double, half, larger
HABIT, what the subject has (habet), e.g., has shoes
POINT OF TIME, when the subject is, e.g., yesterday, in the year before
PLACE, where the subject is, e.g., in the market, in school
ORIENTATION, its position in space, e.g., lying, sitting
ACTION, what the subject is doing, e.g., cutting, burning, crying
PASSION, what is is being done to the subject, e.g., is being cut, or is being burned
We can't really apply these categories to abstract concepts -- but we can to concrete things. That's what makes it a good test to measure for concreteness and specificity.
Take, for example, the word "kiss." Is "kiss" an abstract or concrete concept?
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ReplyDeleteHabit is not one of the categories; a quality, according to Aristotle, can either be habitual or disposed. I think the one you are missing is 'State'
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