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Alright, I'm down to my last review, and I'm rushing a bit because I'm keenly curious to read what Sean has to say. I don't want to cheat by peeking ahead. We're not ego-tripping in any way, we're just bringing to bear our tastes against the judges' selections. Besides, who's reading us, anyway?
I read "The Omega Project" three times, an honor usually reserved for philosophy and science books. I couldn't quite grasp what was going on. I know I'm not that smart, but when I have to go through a story three times, it usually doesn't bode very well. Nevertheless, I persisted because there's something quite appealing about the concept.
I'm not quite sure I get everything yet, so here's my synopsis: the story revolves around a race of intelligent Alpha cockroaches on which scientists are conducting research. Apparently, these cockroaches hold some secret to survival against radiation brought about by nuclear weapons. Omega is some sort of super-cockroach from which all cockroaches descend, and this is the object of the quest. Did I get it right? I don't know.
The story runs on two parallel lines: one from the point-of-view of the scientists who are conducting the research, and the other from that of the Alpha roaches who are fighting a losing battle against humans and non-intelligent Beta cockroaches. This is where I have my first difficulty. I don't quite know what's going on.
There are additional difficulties that the story poses for me, following the two levels on which the story happens.
First, the scientists are bickering like junior high students in a love/hate relationship. Their one-upmanship is quite annoying to read.
Second, the cockroaches don't read like cockroaches at all. The author frequently refers to the cockroaches' hands, but cockroaches don't have hands! Same thing with the references to stomach, instead of thoraxes. Given this propensity, the roaches read more like humans than insects. I don't know if this is the intended effect.
As I said, there's some appeal in the concept of the story. I'm just not quite sure what the story is all about.
But then again, I'm jest an idjit.